Our Views: More prose, less poetry

President Barack Obama’s speech at the Democratic National Convention is a proof that one campaigns with poetry but governs in prose.

The speech talked about policy and took some shots at the Republican ticket, but it did not soar. It did not exactly disappoint Obama’s followers in Charlotte, but its emphasis on the president’s policy agenda over the past four years was prosaic by comparison with his potential as a speaker.

Nor did the president leave much time for more details about what he hopes to achieve in a second term.

It thus was a speech that defined the Obama presidency for what it is against as much as what it is for. No to the GOP plan, which has been endorsed by some Democrats, to change Medicare into something of a private-insurance system. No to tax cuts for the best-off households, but not a specific plan to get enough revenue to balance the budget.

And another “no” to Republican nominee Mitt Romney’s bellicose language about Russia, China, Iran — well, almost everybody. We share Obama’s concerns that this election-year rhetoric isn’t helpful to America’s chances of leading in a world of dramatic changes, where we need to work with Russia and China even as we tussle with them.

On a more parochial note, what did the president’s prose have to say to our Louisiana concerns?

Obama’s emphasis on world trade is good for our state, home to the great outlets of America’s heartland. We also are heartened by his emphasis on domestic oil and gas production, which is a big part of Louisiana’s economy but also a vital element of greater national prosperity.

So if his speech was more prose than poetry, some parts of it deserve a bit of applause.


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Comments (9)


1) Comment by bourbon-soda - 13/09/2012

I was not attempting to quote Shakespeare, merely using a phrase of his to emphasize that the article lacks emotion (lacks sound and fury) as well as significance. It reads like a reluctantly written middle school homework assignment. The use of "thus" is a dead giveaway.

2) Comment by DMJ - 13/09/2012

Ahh...The American President. I love Aaron Sorkin. Imagine... A President who full-throatedly advocates agressive environmental legislation and gun control. Oh, Hollywood.....

3) Comment by Tea_Slayer - 13/09/2012

Bourbon-soda, you misquoted Shakespeare, quite horribly in fact. A quote from a wonderful movie comes to mind when I think about the Republicns Party and Romney in particular, just replace Bob Rumson with Mitt Romney in th efollowing quote. " I've known Bob Rumson for years, and I've been operating under the assumption that the reason Bob devotes so much time and energy to shouting at the rain was that he simply didn't get it. Well, I was wrong. Bob's problem isn't that he doesn't get it. Bob's problem is that he can't sell it! We have serious problems to solve, and we need serious people to solve them. And whatever your particular problem is, I promise you, Bob Rumson is not the least bit interested in solving it. He is interested in two things and two things only: making you afraid of it and telling you who's to blame for it. That, ladies and gentlemen, is how you win elections." - The American President

4) Comment by bourbon-soda - 13/09/2012

Tea_Slayer, yes, it is very important that everyone be identifiably stroked as the Titanic takes on water. Obama supposedly has an advantage in that 22% more of the population believe he cares about them as opposed to Romney. This is what now determines elections. I wish he would care lass about me.

5) Comment by Whatnow - 13/09/2012

Other than the large crowds of people crying and worshiping, his speech was almost a duplicate of the 2008 promises. And he's still promising the same things.

6) Comment by Tea_Slayer - 13/09/2012

8point0, yeah you can't make this stuff up. From your yahoo article. I guess the RNC doesn't give a hoot about veterans or the active military "We're proud of the service and sacrifice of our veterans and military families," the DNC said. "And while they were an important and active part our of convention, Mitt Romney failed to even mention them in his speech in Tampa."

7) Comment by 8point6 - 13/09/2012

And in other dnc news: "DNC apologizes for using image of Russian warships at convention" http://news.yahoo.com/blogs/ticket/dnc-russian-warships- convention-image-181737864--election.html you just can't make this stuff up.

8) Comment by bourbon-soda - 13/09/2012

Complete waste of newsprint and bandwidth, devoid of sound and fury and signifying nothing.

9) Comment by Attila - 12/09/2012

How conveniently the Advocate forgets that the Senate of the U. S has REFUSED to take up items passed in the House and moved on to the Senate....a Senate who, for the last three years, has refused to submit their own budget. Here is hoping that Conservatives take the Senate in this election....if they don't it will not matter who wins the Presidential election....it will be gridlock as usual in the Congress.